What we can do to improve?
To improve our title sequence we could make the title credits longer, so that they can be read because they are unreadable at their current duration. Also, there could be more shots to create narrative tension before the 'victim' is killed. If given the opportunity we would also add a 'fade' effect to the music as when the sequence ends the track ends abruptly.
We can further improve our title sequence we can provide a greater range of sounds to enrich our soundscape. Along with this amendment, we will also iron out any continuity errors e.g. with the cupboard.
Perhaps, we may add additional 'blinks' to the flicker effect we have attempted, however if this does not remedy the current incomplete look this creates we will remove this effect from our sequence.
In the forthcoming lessons we may ad colour correction to our shots, to enhance certain aspects of the mise-en-scene.
We can further improve our title sequence we can provide a greater range of sounds to enrich our soundscape. Along with this amendment, we will also iron out any continuity errors e.g. with the cupboard.
Perhaps, we may add additional 'blinks' to the flicker effect we have attempted, however if this does not remedy the current incomplete look this creates we will remove this effect from our sequence.
In the forthcoming lessons we may ad colour correction to our shots, to enhance certain aspects of the mise-en-scene.
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